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Venus and the Comets
by Erika Tamar
Nine-year-old Venus Macguire is ready to trade smiling
for the camera for nailing a soccer ball into the net. Her
mother isn’t thrilled. She’s been grooming Venus
for supermodel status since her daughter was three. Everyone
at school knows about Venus’s famous commercials, and
some of the girls on the soccer squad don’t think she’s
cut out for athletic competition. Thing is, Venus is a soccer
natural. When she’s scheduled to be the Cinderella
doll at a toy store grand opening, the would-be soccer star
has to show everyone, even herself, that her real goal is
not to be special—it’s just to be the real Venus:
a kid with a kick!
Reviews:
School Library Journal
Gr 2-4-Venus wants to quit modeling and play soccer like a
normal nine-year-old, but when she joins a team, her mother
is less than enthusiastic. Finally, the girl resorts to drastic
measures; she chops off her beautiful curls to get out of dressing
up like a Cinderella doll for a toy-store opening, an event
that conflicts with the Comets' first game. Tamar fills her
tale with over-the-top exaggerations, yet the humor falls short.
Venus's mother is a stock character, a former Miss Texas Oil
Well with a rhinestone oil well tiara in her memory bank. She
lavishes all her attention on her only child, hoping that her
daughter will have a future consisting of more than a bookkeeping
job. Venus is teased and treated rudely by many of her teammates
either because they are jealous or because she shows up to practice
dressed in white shorts trimmed with gold ribbon. Ultimately
she does make a friend who has the same competitive spirit toward
soccer as Venus had previously when auditioning for her modeling
jobs. However, readers never develop sympathy for any of the
characters,
Kirkus Reviews
Venus Maguire, aging child model, longs for something more.
Her commercials for diapers and baby products still air on television,
but at age nine, she’s getting a little too old for these
roles. Her stage mother has indulged her tantrums and pouting
over the years, because she wants her daughter to be even more
famous than she was as Miss Texas Oil pageant. Now she really
doesn’t want Venus to spoil her looks while playing soccer.
Chock full of cardboard caricatures: Venus with her sparkly
crown and advanced knowledge of make up, the striving mother,
and the jealous trio of mean girls who thwart Venus as she tries
her feet at soccer, this has little to recommend it. While there
is a dearth of good sports books for young girls, this effort,
with predictable plot--was there any question that Venus would
find herself and new friends on the field?--and choppy writing,
misses the goal. (Fiction. 7-9)
The Bulletin of the Center for Children’s Books
The format is inviting and accessible for reluctant or just
new readers: short chapters, large print, and generous spacing….Disgruntled
mama’s darlings will take heart in [Venus’s] rebellion
and in the realization that when you come down off your pedestal,
you just might land in the midst of some really nice people.
ForeWord, Mid-winter, 2004
“Venus’s white T-shirt had ‘Starlet’ stitched
on it with gold thread. Her white shorts were trimmed with gold
ribbon. Her anklets had matching lacy gold edges. Jill S. saw
her first. ‘Oh, look. It’s Soccer Barbie.’”
Nine-year-old Venus is determined to be a soccer star, but
her single mother is determined that her only child be “the
Supermodel of 2013.” Venus is tired of curling irons,
ruffled party dresses, and keeping her smile wide so her dimples
would show. She wants to be a part of the Comets soccer team
and have friends, rather than spend weekends modeling to please
adults. When her first soccer match is scheduled on the same
day as she is slated to play Cinderella at a toy store grand
opening, Venus takes drastic measures to prove to her mother
how important it is for her to be with her team.
The author, who was born in Austria but raised in New York
City, is well known in the world of books for children and young
adults. Originally a screenwriter for television, she has written
twenty books for children and teens, revealing a deep understanding
of youths’ concerns. Her novel Junkyard Dog received
a starred review from Publishers Weekly; other titles
have been chosen as American Library Association Best Books
for Young Adults and the International Reading Association Young
Adults’ Choices.
Plenty of realistic preteen dialogue makes her latest volume
appealing to girls who are beginning to read chapter books,
or to reluctant young female readers. The characters, while
somewhat undeveloped individually, portray typical types
of upper elementary aged girls—the athletic, the timid,
the klutzy, the snobbish. Young readers will identify with Venus’s
need to be one of the group and a confident team player. “I
want to be a regular kid for now. I mean, a real one,” she
says. Written for ages seven to nine, this realistic novel
will receive high-fives from its readers.
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5 1/2” x 7 5/16”
96 pages
Fiction • Ages 7 - 9
1-58196-007-7
Hardcover w/dust jacket
$14.95 US/ $23.95 CAN
1-58196-018-2
Paperback Digest
$4.99 US/ $7.99 CAN
Awards:
A Junior Library Guild selection
Scholastic Book Fairs list Spring 2004
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